09-12-2022 - Class feedback - Kaja

Feedback on the full edit

1/3

• Nice opening shot
• Jerky pan, could end while still moving
• Faster cuts, over and back, more hectic
• Walking backwards could be more jerky and weird, effects when walking back, speed up, saturation
• It's very nice visually
• Birds, go more pink, more funky

2/3

• More flickery, fast, glitchy
• Nice graffiti shots
• When music is calming down - video could calm down too

3/3

• Walking up the stairs - cut back to people dancing
• Walking in alone - cut back to dj
• Good cut to the big scene but maybe more red
• Gesture could be glitchy, fast, repeating
• Bring red as a overlay to the bigger scene
• Start with her alone, then 2 people, then more
• Bring her back sooner, she's the main character
• Bathroom shots are too dark, do some colour grade
• Repeat her at the cigarette machine
• Fade out music sooner, video ends abruptly
• Fade to black
• Consistency with reverse shots
• It's coming together very well
• Graffiti shots coming back
• Next Thursday deadline
• Each report to canvas, max 1000 words self and peer evaluation. Links to blogs and video
• What went well, would do differently
• Detail of what you were doing is on the blog
• Informal presentation, a change to see what others are doing