Feedback on the full edit 1/3 Nice opening shot Jerky pan, could end while still moving Faster cuts, over and back, more hectic Walking backwards could be more jerky and weird, effects when walking back, speed up, saturation It's very nice visually Birds, go more pink, more funky 2/3 More flickery, fast, glitchy Nice graffiti shots When music is calming down - video could calm down too 3/3 Walking up the stairs - cut back to people dancing Walking in alone - cut back to dj Good cut to the big scene but maybe more red Gesture could be glitchy, fast, repeating Bring red as a overlay to the bigger scene Start with her alone, then 2 people, then more Bring her back sooner, she's the main character Bathroom shots are too dark, do some colour grade Repeat her at the cigarette machine Fade out music sooner, video ends abruptly Fade to black Consistency with reverse shots It's coming together very well Graffiti shots coming back Next Thursday deadline Each report to canvas, max 100...