AV Technology - Fantastic Four

https://youtu.be/Ebybi9tlW1w  

Feedback on the full edit 1/3 Nice opening shot Jerky pan, could end while still moving Faster cuts, over and back, more hectic Walking backwards could be more jerky and weird, effects when walking back, speed up, saturation It's very nice visually Birds, go more pink, more funky 2/3 More flickery, fast, glitchy Nice graffiti shots When music is calming down - video could calm down too 3/3 Walking up the stairs - cut back to people dancing Walking in alone - cut back to dj Good cut to the big scene but maybe more red Gesture could be glitchy, fast, repeating Bring red as a overlay to the bigger scene Start with her alone, then 2 people, then more Bring her back sooner, she's the main character Bathroom shots are too dark, do some colour grade Repeat her at the cigarette machine Fade out music sooner, video ends abruptly Fade to black Consistency with reverse shots It's coming together very well Graffiti shots coming back Next Thursday deadline Each report to canvas, max 100...

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 For my part of the music video I did the first minute of editing where Sadie is getting ready to go out.  To start out the editing I picked out all the footage of her getting ready in the house and placed them in order of what I thought would look good. To start off I placed the edited out the sound from all the clips and then added in the music underneath it.  I then went with what my the first opening clip would be which is Sadie standing sideways in the doorway vaping. I though the lighting looked good in this shot and wanted it to start off with a darker shot to lead in to the brighter ones. I then transitioned the shot into her getting ready in the mirror and then looking out the window which pans left to the construction site outside. After that I added the shots of her walking down the stairs from the top and bottom and then out the door.  I then added the shot of her making a rollie at the door. I chose the footage where shes centered in the screen because I...

 https://youtu.be/Ro52V2f-yl0  This is the final part of the music video edit I did in Premiere. 

Shooting done. Rough draft. In Premier name bins by scene. Faster cuts. Window shot is good, maybe get more shots of her inside the house. More shots of Sadie getting ready. Make up shots. Shots of Sadie putting on make-up, choosing clothes, can set her up as a character. Make-up in the sink.   Chaotic edgy person, messy room. Easy shooting. Bringing the whole aesthetic. Bring up exposure, and contrast in the inside mirror shot.  Can be fixed in editing - saturation, colour grade. Deadline monday week. Or even wednesday. Next friday full new edit with existing clips.   Nice shots from crack jennys. Might be too long for 1 min. More various shots of her in the bathroom etc. Overlaying the night out during the first parts. TO DO: Full draft next week. Label posts.  

 Yesterday and today I worked on gathering everyones clips, going through them and editing an initial first draft to show Maria tomorrow.